Wednesday, 15 September 2021
my poem's!
kia ora and happy maori language week!😊🎉🎉🎉 today I made a poem about valcanos (two in fact) on my slide, it was very fun I hope you can try it! It only took me a while to fnish it but doing it was fun! kia ora (thank you) to owairaka for all the fun stuff we get to do during lockdown! can you guess what type of eruption I was talking about on my first poem (under the ocaen...) blog you later🙃✌️
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Kia ora Ina, thank you for sharing your work with us. I can see you have thought carefully about what words to use - I can just imagine this happening! You have done well to get the syllable count correct - tino pai.
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Kia pai tō rā. (Have a good day.)
ola Miss whysall. Thank you for the nice coment! I have fun writting both. A few times I went on google to help me count them!
DeleteKia paī tō rā to you too🙃✌️
Kia ora Ina, thank you for sharing your poetry slide on your blog. I really like that you put your poem on slide 9 into a word cloud shaped as Earth. it was great thinking to include the poem above it too, as it may have been a bit tricky reading it inside the word cloud.I really like how it rhymes . Perhaps you could separate your poem into lines so it is easier to read?
ReplyDeletehi miss burt thank you for advice, I will try that next time. That was my first time useing word cloud! but thank you miss burt! blog you later!🙃✌️
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